Brian orchestrates or watches as Justin is f@#ked

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

After reading Rhiannonhero's Happy Fucking Birthday and Incarnadine it started me thinking that there aren't many fics where there is a threesome where Justin is fucked by someone It seems that most of the Justin/Other fics have Justin topping.

I'm not looking for polyamory relationships of the sort OG Walton and Ashley Kinnerson write about.

I'm more interested in one off, hot encounters where Brian is watching or orchestrating (or maybe Justin in orchestrating it for Brian's benefit) Justin being topped by someone else -- like in triciaqaf's Inevidable Part 2 (Inevitable Part 1 here.)

Note, I would prefer something with an organized storyline - like the fics referenced over just plain PWP. Also, it always helps if the fic is well written - has been beta'd, author knows how to write a simple declarative sentence, not in 2nd person (and of course I already am familiar with plumsuede's -- anyway, her writing is an exception). Okay, I'm asking a lot, I know.

ETA: A couple suggestions - mostly a lot of conversation, but worth wading through.

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[wouldbedorothy.livejournal.com]

2nd person often feels the most natural pov in which to write Brian, for me, because it lets him be emotional but a bit removed at the same time. You can have him say/think things that would border on sounding ooc in 1st. But I know a lot of people find it weird.

Of course, I know just as many people who can't stand reading 1st person.

Now I'm suddenly curious if there are folks with a 3rd person peeve, lol.

(I started to be like, "SUN?", but I just got it! Haha! I am also SUN.)