Brian orchestrates or watches as Justin is f@#ked

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

After reading Rhiannonhero's Happy Fucking Birthday and Incarnadine it started me thinking that there aren't many fics where there is a threesome where Justin is fucked by someone It seems that most of the Justin/Other fics have Justin topping.

I'm not looking for polyamory relationships of the sort OG Walton and Ashley Kinnerson write about.

I'm more interested in one off, hot encounters where Brian is watching or orchestrating (or maybe Justin in orchestrating it for Brian's benefit) Justin being topped by someone else -- like in triciaqaf's Inevidable Part 2 (Inevitable Part 1 here.)

Note, I would prefer something with an organized storyline - like the fics referenced over just plain PWP. Also, it always helps if the fic is well written - has been beta'd, author knows how to write a simple declarative sentence, not in 2nd person (and of course I already am familiar with plumsuede's -- anyway, her writing is an exception). Okay, I'm asking a lot, I know.

ETA: A couple suggestions - mostly a lot of conversation, but worth wading through.

Comments

[mander3-swish.livejournal.com]

Hi! I wrote one last year called Spin...from the spin instructor's pov (a S4 liberty ride arc gapfiller/au).
archiveofourown.org/works/693824

It's not particularly lengthy, but it does have bottom!Justin. I just reread it, and while I think I should do another quick edit on it, it was written for a fan_flashworks challenge and not meant to be an epic work of perfection.

And jeez, if your gift prompt hadn't said no threesome, there totally would have been toppy justin in there ;P

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

:)

I'll go check yours out!

[pet0511.livejournal.com]

On a side note: I had no memory of one of the stories by Rhiannonhero you mentioned and learned when I tried to go to her website that it is deleted. I am shocked and sad. Does anybody know why she did it? It really is sad.
:-(
Pet

[vlredreign.livejournal.com]

Dunno. I was gonna ask her, but I'm thinking it's because she's publishing fic now.

[josieb1.livejournal.com]

Ohhh is she, do you know her author name please?

[vlredreign.livejournal.com]

Leta Blake.

[josieb1.livejournal.com]

I actually have one of her books! that's wonderful. Thank you.

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

you can go to rhihero_fic and she has write ups there

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

You can pull all the content off of the last backup from the Wayback Machine - I did.

[pet0511.livejournal.com]

I would if I knew how. Already saved the two you linked to :-)))

[josieb1.livejournal.com]

Go to this page and I think you can follow the links on the page, https://web.archive.org/web/20130616145357/http://rhiannonhero.net/

[pet0511.livejournal.com]

You are my hero!!! Thanks!!!!!!!!

[rhiannonhero.livejournal.com]

Hi! :) I didn't actually delete the site, it's more that I failed to renew it, mainly because I didn't get an email reminder to pay for it. Now apparently, it's long dead and gone and can't be retrieved. The good news is that most everything is up at AO3 (http://archiveofourown.org/users/rhiannonhero) or on my fic journal (rhihero_fic. The only fic that is missing, as far as I can tell, is Omelet. I can't find it anywhere. Hopefully someone else has it.

[pet0511.livejournal.com]

Obviously we can get to all stories you've written via the wayback machine - thanks God! Your website can't be gone that long - I'm pretty sure I had a "Rhia-revival" only a few months ago.
Saving your fics is a must now but it would be so great to "rescue" the website like it was, it is designed so beautiful!
Did I already thank you for sharing your writing? :-)

[bluecat731.livejournal.com]

I've found "Omelet" through the wayback machine. Here's the link. https://web.archive.org/web/20100223202918/http://www.rhiannonhero.net/rhi/QueerAsFolk/omelet.html

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

looks like someone found it on the wayback machine and provided you a link - If you'd like me to extract the text let me know and I'll send it to you.

[vlredreign.livejournal.com]

Had to jump in to say that I really don't get people's aversion to 2nd person. I love it, it puts me in the character's mind. I've even written a couple, it's way easier to keep the thread of what I'm conveying.

K, SUN.

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

Most people can't edit themselves to do it well - as I mentioned, Plum gets a pass - she certainly is the exception to the rule.
But most people can't haven't mastered it. It takes a lot of discipline to make it believable as opposed to so bad it's funny. And then there is always my feeling that it is a bit silence of the lambs-ish "it puts the lotion..." and don't get me started on people who talk about themselves in the third person...
I'd rather read POV or third person. Just my preference.

E.T.A. typo

[vlredreign.livejournal.com]

Plum is gifted with 2nd person. One of the ones I did was for the last BBTP. It was about 700 words. The other one was for one of the QAF icons with a twist challenges. It just came out that way.

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

see, I'd read your stuff because I know you would take the time to do it right. What is BBTP?

[wouldbedorothy.livejournal.com]

Bring Back The Porn challenge on IJ.

[wouldbedorothy.livejournal.com]

2nd person often feels the most natural pov in which to write Brian, for me, because it lets him be emotional but a bit removed at the same time. You can have him say/think things that would border on sounding ooc in 1st. But I know a lot of people find it weird.

Of course, I know just as many people who can't stand reading 1st person.

Now I'm suddenly curious if there are folks with a 3rd person peeve, lol.

(I started to be like, "SUN?", but I just got it! Haha! I am also SUN.)

[qafmyaddiction.livejournal.com]

*lengthy chapter suggestions...but very well written*

http://heelsoverhead.net/stories/lovebetweenmen.html (this is a part of a long series....in the bottom half of this chapter Justin is dp)

and

http://heelsoverhead.net/stories/vee.html (same series... at very bottom of the chapter...Justin is in a threesome with his lover and Brian)

[sunandstars-1.livejournal.com]

Here is Rhiannonhero's fiction in it's entirety.

See link:

http://web.archive.org/web/20081104204035/http://www.rhiannonhero.net/rhi/QaFMain.htm

Ellen :)