Brian orchestrates or watches as Justin is f@#ked

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

After reading Rhiannonhero's Happy Fucking Birthday and Incarnadine it started me thinking that there aren't many fics where there is a threesome where Justin is fucked by someone It seems that most of the Justin/Other fics have Justin topping.

I'm not looking for polyamory relationships of the sort OG Walton and Ashley Kinnerson write about.

I'm more interested in one off, hot encounters where Brian is watching or orchestrating (or maybe Justin in orchestrating it for Brian's benefit) Justin being topped by someone else -- like in triciaqaf's Inevidable Part 2 (Inevitable Part 1 here.)

Note, I would prefer something with an organized storyline - like the fics referenced over just plain PWP. Also, it always helps if the fic is well written - has been beta'd, author knows how to write a simple declarative sentence, not in 2nd person (and of course I already am familiar with plumsuede's -- anyway, her writing is an exception). Okay, I'm asking a lot, I know.

ETA: A couple suggestions - mostly a lot of conversation, but worth wading through.

Comments

[mander3-swish.livejournal.com]

Hi! I wrote one last year called Spin...from the spin instructor's pov (a S4 liberty ride arc gapfiller/au).
archiveofourown.org/works/693824

It's not particularly lengthy, but it does have bottom!Justin. I just reread it, and while I think I should do another quick edit on it, it was written for a fan_flashworks challenge and not meant to be an epic work of perfection.

And jeez, if your gift prompt hadn't said no threesome, there totally would have been toppy justin in there ;P

[pet0511.livejournal.com]

On a side note: I had no memory of one of the stories by Rhiannonhero you mentioned and learned when I tried to go to her website that it is deleted. I am shocked and sad. Does anybody know why she did it? It really is sad.
:-(
Pet

[vlredreign.livejournal.com]

Had to jump in to say that I really don't get people's aversion to 2nd person. I love it, it puts me in the character's mind. I've even written a couple, it's way easier to keep the thread of what I'm conveying.

K, SUN.

[qafmyaddiction.livejournal.com]

*lengthy chapter suggestions...but very well written*

http://heelsoverhead.net/stories/lovebetweenmen.html (this is a part of a long series....in the bottom half of this chapter Justin is dp)

and

http://heelsoverhead.net/stories/vee.html (same series... at very bottom of the chapter...Justin is in a threesome with his lover and Brian)

[sunandstars-1.livejournal.com]

Here is Rhiannonhero's fiction in it's entirety.

See link:

http://web.archive.org/web/20081104204035/http://www.rhiannonhero.net/rhi/QaFMain.htm

Ellen :)