Brian orchestrates or watches as Justin is f@#ked

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

After reading Rhiannonhero's Happy Fucking Birthday and Incarnadine it started me thinking that there aren't many fics where there is a threesome where Justin is fucked by someone It seems that most of the Justin/Other fics have Justin topping.

I'm not looking for polyamory relationships of the sort OG Walton and Ashley Kinnerson write about.

I'm more interested in one off, hot encounters where Brian is watching or orchestrating (or maybe Justin in orchestrating it for Brian's benefit) Justin being topped by someone else -- like in triciaqaf's Inevidable Part 2 (Inevitable Part 1 here.)

Note, I would prefer something with an organized storyline - like the fics referenced over just plain PWP. Also, it always helps if the fic is well written - has been beta'd, author knows how to write a simple declarative sentence, not in 2nd person (and of course I already am familiar with plumsuede's -- anyway, her writing is an exception). Okay, I'm asking a lot, I know.

ETA: A couple suggestions - mostly a lot of conversation, but worth wading through.

Comments

[vlredreign.livejournal.com]

Had to jump in to say that I really don't get people's aversion to 2nd person. I love it, it puts me in the character's mind. I've even written a couple, it's way easier to keep the thread of what I'm conveying.

K, SUN.

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

Most people can't edit themselves to do it well - as I mentioned, Plum gets a pass - she certainly is the exception to the rule.
But most people can't haven't mastered it. It takes a lot of discipline to make it believable as opposed to so bad it's funny. And then there is always my feeling that it is a bit silence of the lambs-ish "it puts the lotion..." and don't get me started on people who talk about themselves in the third person...
I'd rather read POV or third person. Just my preference.

E.T.A. typo

[vlredreign.livejournal.com]

Plum is gifted with 2nd person. One of the ones I did was for the last BBTP. It was about 700 words. The other one was for one of the QAF icons with a twist challenges. It just came out that way.

[netlagd.livejournal.com]

see, I'd read your stuff because I know you would take the time to do it right. What is BBTP?

[wouldbedorothy.livejournal.com]

Bring Back The Porn challenge on IJ.

[wouldbedorothy.livejournal.com]

2nd person often feels the most natural pov in which to write Brian, for me, because it lets him be emotional but a bit removed at the same time. You can have him say/think things that would border on sounding ooc in 1st. But I know a lot of people find it weird.

Of course, I know just as many people who can't stand reading 1st person.

Now I'm suddenly curious if there are folks with a 3rd person peeve, lol.

(I started to be like, "SUN?", but I just got it! Haha! I am also SUN.)