I can't remember all the details and can't check at the moment, but the last scene goes something like - - Justin leaves Brian asleep in the hotel room, after they almost have sex but Brian gets mad when Justin says he doesn't know if he's "clean" and admits that he hasn't always used a condom when hustling...
As Justin walks out he's thinking about how his life used to be divided into two parts, before Brian and after Brian, but now it's divided into three parts, before Brian, after Brian and New York...
...send me your e-mail in a private message and I'll send you chapter 5 though it'll take me a couple of days. And since my computer crashed last spring I'm stuck using public computers, so, if you don't mind, I'll have to put the chapter right in the e-mail.
You're right, it does end a little bit better than the version I had, but there's still so much more that could be done w/ it! It's a shame it wasn't ever REALLY finished.
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Date: 2010-07-29 09:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-08-03 07:20 pm (UTC)As Justin walks out he's thinking about how his life used to be divided into two parts, before Brian and after Brian, but now it's divided into three parts, before Brian, after Brian and New York...
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Date: 2010-08-03 07:43 pm (UTC)Brian and Justin haven't even found each other yet.
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Date: 2010-08-03 09:09 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-08-03 09:27 pm (UTC)And no, I don't mind waiting!
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Date: 2010-08-07 07:43 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-08-08 01:17 pm (UTC)You're right, it does end a little bit better than the version I had, but there's still so much more that could be done w/ it!
It's a shame it wasn't ever REALLY finished.
Thanks again!