That's why I don't like "what they were thinking during that scene" fic. I let my characters narrate when I write in the first person (which I don't usually do anymore, for a number of reasons), but I try not to let them say more "in their heads" than they normally said out loud during the show.
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Date: 2012-03-26 03:38 am (UTC)